Review of Allan Haward's Proposal

Summary of the proposal:

The proposed system automates remote access to the building's control devices through smart-phone's application using wireless connection. Proposed system will have a flexible and configurable user web interface and reliable alert notification system.

Ratings:

Syntax = 5

Plausibility = 5

Support = 5

Novelty = 5

Stakeholders = 5

Scope = 5

Profitability = 5

Legal = 5

Security = 5

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Total score of the document = 5

Well prepared and presented proposal. Time line and cost break down tables have great details. However, need verification with the customer's deadlines as the proposed time line does include finals week.

Minor suggestion(1st page, 3rd paragraph, 1st sentence):

"This proposal describes a system that integrates the need for people to remotely access their building/home with the new capabilities of the smart-phone."

This sentence somewhat unclear and misled me to think that the user will be able gain access to the building itself through the remote application, so I would suggest to be more specific by replacing "building/home" with "building's devices".

In overall, author has great prior experience that well prepares him for this project. The project has high potential.